Progress Of Music Video & Audience Feedback.

I have uploaded my music video to youtube, showing the progress that I have made to date. I will be asking members of my target audience for constructive feedback, and also what they went well.

Susan:
- On the close up of the image, Susan feels like the scene doesn't end, and if there was just one image it will finish the scene.
- Also Susan thinks that Jessica standing on the ladder is a lovely shot, but she doesn't quite understand it.
- Overall she feels its a good music video, and the video really fits the lyrics of the song.

Stanley:

- The lip syncing is really well timed, makes it look like the artist is actually singing int the video.
- The effects with the axe, blocks out the weakness of the artist.
-Stanley also feels that the ladder sequence doesn't make to much sense.

Megan:
- Megan also feels that she didnt understand the point of the ladder scene.
- Megan feels that the lip syncing is in time, and likes the close up of her face.

After deeply considering my audience feedback, I have decided to remove the ladder sequence, and replace it with something that fits in with the storyline.