Here is a comment posted on my completed second draft, with some extremely constructive feedback. The person said that the scene where my artist throws the object is to bright, so therefore I will go back and edit this. I am very appreciative of these feedback, as after I watched it back, I am in complete agreement.
Well done for posting the comment, however you are going to need more than one. Where is your redraft of your music video plus where are your ancillary tasks? The deadline is looming Tayla keep focused.
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