Improvements On Feedback

The feedback I had recieved after completing my second draft was mostly positive, however, there was one clip that my audience were not very fond of, which was my artists crying at the end and rubbing her face, so to please my target audience, I will act on their feedback, and replace this part of the video.

After watching my video, and enlarging it on YouTube, I can see how this looks to my audience, they are right, it does not look very authentic.

 This is one of the clips I have decided to use, it refers back to earlier in the music video, where my artist was burning the image of him. I think this will show continuity in more story line, as I have used the same shot but from a different angle, I also think this fits with the lyrics as she says 'YOU' which is addressed at him, therefore her staring at the image, is ironic. I have slowed down this clip, as it makes a really nice effect, as my artists hair is being blown in the wind, I will also need to adapt this clip to black & white, making it fit in with the rest of the video.

I have also used the same technique here, referring back to an earlier part of the music video. There are two other reasons that I have chosen to use this clip here:
1. The artist refers to walking away in the lyrics.
2. As it is the end of the song, this connotes that she is leaving, it also connotes that she is walking away from the heartbreak.